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This will be my entry for :iconnintendo-girls:'s Daisy contest... since the theme was Daisy with no further explanation, again, I figured I could to whatever I wanted, lol

So princess Daisy having fun at the beach. She's wading around in the waves while drinking lemonade. I wanted her to have a bit of a retro look, kind of like what I did with Peach ([link]) I guess I succeeded more or less, but I still like the picture ;p
Oh, and she buys her sunglasses at the same place as Roy, lol

Daisy is (c) Nintendo (in the Mario games^^)
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Oh, a Daisy picture! I'm not big on Daisy myself but when I saw this I had to take a closer look.

When I first saw this I noticed Daisy's earrings with don't look like the official Daisy pictures, but they look like actual daisies. They have a lot of detail with the petals and it's a more original idea. I also love the hair; I have trouble drawing Daisy's hair but you drew it pretty well. The line of her bottom curl on the left side is a little bit squiggly which is a minor issue and is typically normal when editing through a computer, jittery or not. The clothes look original too, it's not a straight-up bikini, but I feel that the single color orange is a little boring. It could use a cute design of some sort.. it doesn't have to go "all-out" but some kind of design would be nice.

The body itself looks great. Her arms look really nice, I have a problem drawing those myself so I know how difficult it can be sometimes. I know her left hand is supposed to be touching her hip, but it looks like it should be a little closer to the edge. I'm probably not right, but it just looks like it should but a little tiny bit closer to the edge of her hip, because that's where most people put their hands, at their hips.

I adore the eyes, so big and blue! You added more lashes too, which is nice.

I like the water effects too, it looks more like a beach. The trees and beach could have used a little more enhancing, they looks to be sketches but it might have been for the cute simplicity. They look okay, but just from my perspective they could have used something. The sky looks very full with it's clouds and looks nice. As a suggestion, a lens flare would have been cool to act as the sun and it's rays, but it's not majorly necessary, it's just a little effect.

Overall I really like this. Not everything about this picture is "canon" in the sense that you went original and had your own ideas about the little things, like her earrings, her clothes, and the little sunglasses, those are cute. The lemonade looks nice too; I'm glad you didn't make it a martini, heheh.

Very good! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> I've been checking out your art recently and I just adore it. I hope to see more from you soon, and have a nice day.